The Happy Tornado
By, Dylan Diener, age 6
Dictated to mom.
Once upon a time, there was a tornado at a school. And the tornado went down on the school. It wrecked the school a little bit. But it didn’t really do it.
It went down to the ground really fast.
The kids inside the school heard bump bump bump, jump jump jump. It was a tornado that had a smile on his face.
One of the kids smiled back.
All of the teachers protected themselves and the kids.
One day the tornado went away.
When it did and the school said, “hooray.” And they had a concert in the gym.
The end.

2 comments:
What a great story! Conflict, characterization, an uplifting ending--loved it!
Ha ha ha, so cute to hear the thoughts of our children!
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